Hey guys! Happy snow day! At least I think it’s a happy snow day as I’m at WORK while Chris and the kids are having fun at home! Hopefully I can leave a bit early this afternoon and catch some sledding time with the kiddos!
I’m popping in to reveal the winner of our Fresh Class from JULY. Yes. We are about six months late on this one but whatever. We just gave them ample time to practice! And I have to tell you, we are SO proud of the four ladies who wanted to compete for a FREE session with us!
In the past we’ve let you guys all vote on your favorite image and this time we decided we wanted to do the voting ourselves. And although all four images are great, there was a clear winner this time and I hope you all agree!
So what we’re going to do is show you the image and then underneath will be our critique. We are being honest and hope that no feelings are hurt… ultimately we want you each to grow and get better. And when all you hear from family and friends is “wow! you take the BEST pictures!” then you stop really looking at your photos and trying to constantly improve. And trust me, I fell into that bad habit. I’d get so many compliments that I really thought I was good with my Canon Rebel taking snap shots of my kids! But DUDE did I have a long way to go! Even now, there are shots in every session I wish I had taken differently. Kim and I are constantly standing back with a critical eye and working to be better. So we feel this part of our class is important. To hear OUR thoughts on what you did well and what needs improvement…
First up, KATIE!
Oh how proud she is of her new 3 year old status! Great focus and clarity! Perfect really! Would have loved to see this without such a competing background so she would pop out more! Between the edge of the door, the doorbell and the brick it takes your eyes off her and the flowers that happen to match her perfectly… I would have loved to see her with just the flowers as a background or the trees in your back yard. Gorgeous+crisp colors too, I mean, does it get any better than pink & green on your blonde cutie?? Her skin tone is perfect too! You had all the technical parts great, it’s just the composition that was lacking a little… but overall hitting the technical is hardest so great job!
Bravo! I’m having a hard time finding anything to critique. Awesome use of depth of field, love the leading lines of the alley, adore the moment you captured! And all in a dark bowling alley! Super job! The only thing I can even notice is that I think the focus is on his tush instead of his head, but in that dark of a setting it’s amazing! Truly, this is a seriously good shot! Technical and composition!In his previous turn, he had gotten all but the one pin you see standing. He wanted to get a spare so bad. This photo allows us to be right there with him wanting the ball to hit that last pin. And while you can’t see the look on his face, you can just imagine all the hope that he has.
As a 5 year old, he wants to be so good at so many things; he wants to be a grown up so bad. Sometimes we just have to “hit the floor” and hope for the best.

Jodie,
Needless to say I am ecstatic not only that Colleen won but that I’ve gotten to see this picutre…..I just spent two weeks with Colleen, Paul and the children. We had discussed the contest aand she didn’t know what she was going to submit. We didn’t go bowling either though Liam has asked to. As you can imagine our days were full and fun (it’s summer in NZ.
Anyway, I had said to Colleen, I’d love to get a good photo next time all my family was in twon and she mentioned the contest….hopefully we will get together. Love to you and all your family. I am doing well all things considered. It’s already three years since my life got dumped upside down but I am so blessed in so many ways. I am even living in Webster Groves…beyond my wildest imagination.
Love,
Kathy Stock
737 Landscape Ave.
Webster Groves, 63119
314 452 1950
What a wonderful photo! You’re absolutely right in your critique: the placement of leading lines are perfect and the depth of field really works. I don’t even mind that Liam’s head is not 100% tack sharp. This way there is a gradual shift of focus and the viewer is not distracted by perfectly sharp wood planks. The red bowling ball contributes to the image as well, as it passes the darkest area of the lane. Photographer’s grade: A+.